(11:00 PM, December 20th, 2003) - "Ja raha hoon mein, aur ab nahin aayonga kabhi !!", he yelled, took away some his stuff, hurriedly started his scooter and came out of the house.
(11:00 AM, January 7th, 2004) - "Kewal apne Certificates lene aaya hoon", he said to his mother, who was standing at the door, tears flooding in her eyes. She wanted to embrace him, but than he has now become brutal and cruel, to not let the emotions erode his EGO.
(11:25 AM, January 7th, 2004) - Bheegi aankhon se woh vida ho gaya. Ghar se nikalte hue soch raha tha, kitni choti si baat per woh "Ja raha hoon mein, phir kabhi na aane ke liye" Keh aaya tha.
(11:00 AM, August 2nd, 2004) - Switching company again, now he is richie rich, He want it to share with his family and celebrate at home, but he hath left that, and jub bhi usse ghar ki yaad aati hai to Maa ki woh Bheegi Aankhen. "No !! It's was not my fault, Pitaji was adamant, Maa also supported him that day", he consoles himself. Asks his bro to deliever the news of the switch.
(11:00 AM, October 4th, 2004) - Switched again, Now he is ahead of all the guys he was competing against, He wants to see his "Maa" just once before he leaves for alien city, But has no courage to face her, so he goes to the Park in front of the Temple, where his Mom use to visit, and uses Binoculars to see her one last time.
(11:00 AM, January 15th, 2005) - Today he is flying US again. He wanted to share the news, But was able to call up his friend only and then asked him to convey the news. His EGO is....but still doesnot want to face his Father and "Maa". His friend tells him that his Mom is ill. He say, "hmmm".
(11:00 AM, July 12, 2005) - He has identified a girl to marry, Coming to India to marry her in Court. Only few Friends are there. His Bro calls him, "Congrats Bhaiya, Ab to bahut bade ho gaye ho, Maa ne Bahu ke liye Kangun Bheje hain, 'Sneh' aaj shaam pahuch raha hai, woh leta aayega!!". He knows the sarcasm and hatred in the voice. Shaam ko "Sneh", bahu ke haath mein kangan rakh ker chala jata hai. He sat at the rooftop in night and after a long time, kept on smoking continously and "Staring at the space"
(11:00 AM, Oct 14, 2005) - He got the H1, and is flying to US with wife. "Shall never come back !! For whom to come ?", were the thoughts hanging round him.
(11:00 AM, Oct 20, 2006) - "News is bad, you Dad had a stroke", Sangini broke the news to him. With tears in his eyes, "Bro shall take care !! I have come too far now !". "Atleast you should call !", says Sangini. "It doesnot matter now !". he replied.
(11:00 AM, Oct 21, 2006) - Calls Ayush, asks him to travel to home and mobilises resources. Ayush retorts, "They need you !!"
(11:00 AM, Dec 29, 2008) - "He just wanted to see you one last time", Ayush calls and tells him.
(11:00 AM, January 1, 2009) - He enters Escorts, New Delhi, finds the ICU, meets the Doctors, goes and talks to his Dad one last time, both cried for an hour and then he was left alone in......
(11:00 AM, May 13, 2013) - Bro is coming to Canada. He wants to know, meet but....
(11:00 AM, May 17, 2017) - "'Maa' is coming to Canada", Ayush tells him. Sangini declares that she is going to meet her along with kids. "No, there is no point. Prakher & Piyali shall never understand."
(11:00 AM, August 19, 2022) - "Prakher is in college, Piyali shall go next year, at least now you should ....", says Sangini.
(11:00 AM, May 11, 2025) - "Piyali, Will you accompany me to meet your Grandmother !!", he asks his daughter. "Dad, I know, but okay !!"
(11:00 AM, May 12, 2025) - They were standing near a tree. "See Piyali, She is your Grandmother, and that young gal is 'Nisha'. and the guy with newspaper is your uncle, Chalo ! Lets Go back", He sighed. "But Dad, We have come from such far land, at least we should go and give them a hug", Piyali demands. "No honey !! Lets go back", he says.
(11:00 AM, May 13, 2025) - "Mom, Why Pops did that way, Nisha was so cute, but donno why dad's eyes .....", piyali asks Sangini. Sangini wanna tell but then....
(11:00 AM, Dec 31, 2025) - "Lets go Mom !! It's been enough", He is confronting Mom alone today.
(11:00 AM, January 3, 2026) - He along with "Maa" is resting along the banks of "Ganges" at Haridwar. Both are calm, as if "THEY NEVER LEFT".
(Sometime, Some date, 2037) - Sangini, Prakher, Piyali, Nisha, Ayush and hundreds of others never heard from Him and "Maa" till date.
Beautiful !
ReplyDeleteI could visualize it..that good you wrote !
it was so beautiful !
I almost broke to tears, when
ReplyDeleteI was about to write the original closing, then & thus I changed the closing. I still donot have courage to write that !!
Woha!! man!! Hirdu this was awsome..
ReplyDeleteYou write good mate... keep it coming!! though i wish i cud read the orignal ending...
Hirdu
ReplyDeletethanks for mailing, debalina's posting link.
I am not fine Hirdu, at least I would have been fine in Jail serving life imprisonment or Death Penalty.
"Bali ka bakra" tho main ban gayi hain na, Ek aadmi, pyaar ka naam se meri jism ka istamaal kiya hai.
I was just a Use & throw material. It hurts. It really hurts. Roz uska naam ka aansoo ke sevah aur kuch nahi karti main.
Even today there is a chill in my spine, when I think how that person cheated me..
Speechless after reading it
ReplyDeleteSpeechless after reading it
ReplyDeleteHirdu, why did you write this post? R u "the guy" or just imazination. If imazination, why so horrible one? Do u think any one need 22 long years to meet thier loved one's?
ReplyDeleteI could relate the story. My brother had left home for 6 years & had seen so much tears & agony in my mom's eyes.He got married & had a kid when he met us. Still nothing mattered us. Only feeling of (reunion) getting him back was great.
Hirdu : Well, to be true, I actually broke in tears after reading this...and I felt it was lame to write that earlier...
ReplyDeleteBut..its really good already...
(}) ****HUGS***
Anamika : I donno what to say.. other than, I can understand what you are going through ..
Perhaps, there shall be a day when I'll tell the world why..
But take care of yourself.
Forget the motherfuker and remember, you were too good to someone , and they were too bad and taken advantage of your trust.
Anamika,I thought you were my idol and I can't see you breaking down like this. You have to be fine for yourself ! Please !
Peace ........
[GRTC] - Thanx man !!
ReplyDelete[Anamika]- Oh lord !! Samay !!.
[Rupa] - No, I am not the guy !! This is imagination.
[Akruti] - Saahil ke us paar, kuch roohein aur bhi hai....
[Deb] - hmmmm...
Deb: Let peace be with all of us.
ReplyDeleteI cannot call him mother Fucker because his Mom is too good. And he is not the "HE MAN" I have lost something to cry.
He is spilled milk & Broken Glass, which I never like to pick up at any cost.
Whatever My feelings I could have supressed within me, but he fooled(cheated) me twice. So i dont wanna give him third chance.So spoke open,so he dont dare again.
I wanted to kill Anamika so I disappeared from blogworld, but now she wont die. and there shall & will be blog.
Anamika: i dont know you and i dont know this guy who did soemthing horrible to you. But i do know that some people are just not worth trusting. I can say this because it is a case of "been there done that". Someone did something horrible to me in the past and i havent yet forgotton her and havent forgiven her too. But i realized that i have to move on because whats the point in staying back and thinking about someone who doesnt deserve your time. And dont you ever think of killing yourself. This is your life if you die then that's not gonna effect that mother fucker at all. Live your life and be at peace. May God Bless.
ReplyDeleteHirdu: I hope you dont mind me posting directly for Anamika.
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ReplyDeleteGuyroundthecorner, first of all ur id is so funny. Is there any Corner in a circle or round.
ReplyDeleteIt is between me & him. I can do whatever I want to him for what he has done to me, but Uska mummy ko Gali nahi please. his parents are innocent.
Yes you are Very right, when some one else come in one's life they have to move, & the person whom we dont need are not worth our time. I will take this lesson from you.
To be frank I feel every moment of killing myself.becas I dont know whom to trust in this world.All my dreams are broken.
If i die how it is not going to affect him? It will definately affect him. I will see that he also will be the loser ha ha ha. atleast I will be dead & gone, but he will suffer every minute.
But one thing is sure I will also not live in peace & let him also live in peace. Now he is in peace & enjoying his life.Now I am quite but I Will be rebel queen very soon. Stop here my ideas.
What are you planing to take a revenge on the girl who has done horrible thing to you? Chal Join my Rebel Gang. ha ha ha.
i need that songs lyrics "breathless" teh one " ab jo meray yeh din or ab jo meri yeh ratein hain un mein koi nahin koi nahin"
ReplyDeletecan u plz arrange em?