(11:00 PM, December 20th, 2003) - "Ja raha hoon mein, aur ab nahin aayonga kabhi !!", he yelled, took away some his stuff, hurriedly started his scooter and came out of the house.
(11:00 AM, January 7th, 2004) - "Kewal apne Certificates lene aaya hoon", he said to his mother, who was standing at the door, tears flooding in her eyes. She wanted to embrace him, but than he has now become brutal and cruel, to not let the emotions erode his EGO.
(11:25 AM, January 7th, 2004) - Bheegi aankhon se woh vida ho gaya. Ghar se nikalte hue soch raha tha, kitni choti si baat per woh "Ja raha hoon mein, phir kabhi na aane ke liye" Keh aaya tha.
(11:00 AM, August 2nd, 2004) - Switching company again, now he is richie rich, He want it to share with his family and celebrate at home, but he hath left that, and jub bhi usse ghar ki yaad aati hai to Maa ki woh Bheegi Aankhen. "No !! It's was not my fault, Pitaji was adamant, Maa also supported him that day", he consoles himself. Asks his bro to deliever the news of the switch.
(11:00 AM, October 4th, 2004) - Switched again, Now he is ahead of all the guys he was competing against, He wants to see his "Maa" just once before he leaves for alien city, But has no courage to face her, so he goes to the Park in front of the Temple, where his Mom use to visit, and uses Binoculars to see her one last time.
(11:00 AM, January 15th, 2005) - Today he is flying US again. He wanted to share the news, But was able to call up his friend only and then asked him to convey the news. His EGO is....but still doesnot want to face his Father and "Maa". His friend tells him that his Mom is ill. He say, "hmmm".
(11:00 AM, July 12, 2005) - He has identified a girl to marry, Coming to India to marry her in Court. Only few Friends are there. His Bro calls him, "Congrats Bhaiya, Ab to bahut bade ho gaye ho, Maa ne Bahu ke liye Kangun Bheje hain, 'Sneh' aaj shaam pahuch raha hai, woh leta aayega!!". He knows the sarcasm and hatred in the voice. Shaam ko "Sneh", bahu ke haath mein kangan rakh ker chala jata hai. He sat at the rooftop in night and after a long time, kept on smoking continously and "Staring at the space"
(11:00 AM, Oct 14, 2005) - He got the H1, and is flying to US with wife. "Shall never come back !! For whom to come ?", were the thoughts hanging round him.
(11:00 AM, Oct 20, 2006) - "News is bad, you Dad had a stroke", Sangini broke the news to him. With tears in his eyes, "Bro shall take care !! I have come too far now !". "Atleast you should call !", says Sangini. "It doesnot matter now !". he replied.
(11:00 AM, Oct 21, 2006) - Calls Ayush, asks him to travel to home and mobilises resources. Ayush retorts, "They need you !!"
(11:00 AM, Dec 29, 2008) - "He just wanted to see you one last time", Ayush calls and tells him.
(11:00 AM, January 1, 2009) - He enters Escorts, New Delhi, finds the ICU, meets the Doctors, goes and talks to his Dad one last time, both cried for an hour and then he was left alone in......
(11:00 AM, May 13, 2013) - Bro is coming to Canada. He wants to know, meet but....
(11:00 AM, May 17, 2017) - "'Maa' is coming to Canada", Ayush tells him. Sangini declares that she is going to meet her along with kids. "No, there is no point. Prakhar & Piyali shall never understand."
(11:00 AM, August 19, 2022) - "Prakhar is in college, Piyali shall go next year, at least now you should ....", says Sangini.
(11:00 AM, May 11, 2025) - "Piyali, Will you accompany me to meet your Grandmother !!", he asks his daughter. "Dad, I know, but okay !!"
(11:00 AM, May 12, 2025) - They were standing near a tree. "See Piyali, She is your Grandmother, and that young gal is 'Nisha'. and the guy with newspaper is your uncle, Chalo ! Lets Go back", He sighed. "But Dad, We have come from such far land, at least we should go and give them a hug", Piyali demands. "No honey !! Lets go back", he says.
(11:00 AM, May 13, 2025) - "Mom, Why Pops did that way, Nisha was so cute, but donno why dad's eyes .....", Piyali asks Sangini. Sangini wanna tell but then....
(11:00 AM, Dec 31, 2025) - "Lets go Mom !! It's been enough", He is confronting Mom alone today.
(11:00 AM, January 3, 2026) - He along with "Maa" is resting along the banks of "Ganges" at Haridwar. Both are calm, as if "THEY NEVER LEFT".
(Sometime, Some date, 2037) - Sangini, Prakhar, Piyali, Nisha, Ayush and hundreds of others never heard from Him and "Maa" till date.
(11:00 AM, January 7th, 2004) - "Kewal apne Certificates lene aaya hoon", he said to his mother, who was standing at the door, tears flooding in her eyes. She wanted to embrace him, but than he has now become brutal and cruel, to not let the emotions erode his EGO.
(11:25 AM, January 7th, 2004) - Bheegi aankhon se woh vida ho gaya. Ghar se nikalte hue soch raha tha, kitni choti si baat per woh "Ja raha hoon mein, phir kabhi na aane ke liye" Keh aaya tha.
(11:00 AM, August 2nd, 2004) - Switching company again, now he is richie rich, He want it to share with his family and celebrate at home, but he hath left that, and jub bhi usse ghar ki yaad aati hai to Maa ki woh Bheegi Aankhen. "No !! It's was not my fault, Pitaji was adamant, Maa also supported him that day", he consoles himself. Asks his bro to deliever the news of the switch.
(11:00 AM, October 4th, 2004) - Switched again, Now he is ahead of all the guys he was competing against, He wants to see his "Maa" just once before he leaves for alien city, But has no courage to face her, so he goes to the Park in front of the Temple, where his Mom use to visit, and uses Binoculars to see her one last time.
(11:00 AM, January 15th, 2005) - Today he is flying US again. He wanted to share the news, But was able to call up his friend only and then asked him to convey the news. His EGO is....but still doesnot want to face his Father and "Maa". His friend tells him that his Mom is ill. He say, "hmmm".
(11:00 AM, July 12, 2005) - He has identified a girl to marry, Coming to India to marry her in Court. Only few Friends are there. His Bro calls him, "Congrats Bhaiya, Ab to bahut bade ho gaye ho, Maa ne Bahu ke liye Kangun Bheje hain, 'Sneh' aaj shaam pahuch raha hai, woh leta aayega!!". He knows the sarcasm and hatred in the voice. Shaam ko "Sneh", bahu ke haath mein kangan rakh ker chala jata hai. He sat at the rooftop in night and after a long time, kept on smoking continously and "Staring at the space"
(11:00 AM, Oct 14, 2005) - He got the H1, and is flying to US with wife. "Shall never come back !! For whom to come ?", were the thoughts hanging round him.
(11:00 AM, Oct 20, 2006) - "News is bad, you Dad had a stroke", Sangini broke the news to him. With tears in his eyes, "Bro shall take care !! I have come too far now !". "Atleast you should call !", says Sangini. "It doesnot matter now !". he replied.
(11:00 AM, Oct 21, 2006) - Calls Ayush, asks him to travel to home and mobilises resources. Ayush retorts, "They need you !!"
(11:00 AM, Dec 29, 2008) - "He just wanted to see you one last time", Ayush calls and tells him.
(11:00 AM, January 1, 2009) - He enters Escorts, New Delhi, finds the ICU, meets the Doctors, goes and talks to his Dad one last time, both cried for an hour and then he was left alone in......
(11:00 AM, May 13, 2013) - Bro is coming to Canada. He wants to know, meet but....
(11:00 AM, May 17, 2017) - "'Maa' is coming to Canada", Ayush tells him. Sangini declares that she is going to meet her along with kids. "No, there is no point. Prakhar & Piyali shall never understand."
(11:00 AM, August 19, 2022) - "Prakhar is in college, Piyali shall go next year, at least now you should ....", says Sangini.
(11:00 AM, May 11, 2025) - "Piyali, Will you accompany me to meet your Grandmother !!", he asks his daughter. "Dad, I know, but okay !!"
(11:00 AM, May 12, 2025) - They were standing near a tree. "See Piyali, She is your Grandmother, and that young gal is 'Nisha'. and the guy with newspaper is your uncle, Chalo ! Lets Go back", He sighed. "But Dad, We have come from such far land, at least we should go and give them a hug", Piyali demands. "No honey !! Lets go back", he says.
(11:00 AM, May 13, 2025) - "Mom, Why Pops did that way, Nisha was so cute, but donno why dad's eyes .....", Piyali asks Sangini. Sangini wanna tell but then....
(11:00 AM, Dec 31, 2025) - "Lets go Mom !! It's been enough", He is confronting Mom alone today.
(11:00 AM, January 3, 2026) - He along with "Maa" is resting along the banks of "Ganges" at Haridwar. Both are calm, as if "THEY NEVER LEFT".
(Sometime, Some date, 2037) - Sangini, Prakhar, Piyali, Nisha, Ayush and hundreds of others never heard from Him and "Maa" till date.
Beautiful !
ReplyDeleteI could visualize it..that good you wrote !
it was so beautiful !
I almost broke to tears, when
ReplyDeleteI was about to write the original closing, then & thus I changed the closing. I still donot have courage to write that !!
Woha!! man!! Hirdu this was awsome..
ReplyDeleteYou write good mate... keep it coming!! though i wish i cud read the orignal ending...
Speechless after reading it
ReplyDeleteSpeechless after reading it
ReplyDelete[GRTC] - Thanx man !!
ReplyDelete[Anamika]- Oh lord !! Samay !!.
[Rupa] - No, I am not the guy !! This is imagination.
[Akruti] - Saahil ke us paar, kuch roohein aur bhi hai....
[Deb] - hmmmm...
i need that songs lyrics "breathless" teh one " ab jo meray yeh din or ab jo meri yeh ratein hain un mein koi nahin koi nahin"
ReplyDeletecan u plz arrange em?